Good use of camera
Add background sound throughout??
Good use of effects solid screens and visual
Mise en scene went well with song
Good Performance
Well put together made sense of its genre
Camera work
Couple of types of shots. Close shot and long shot. Even though so far they are the only ones used they fit well with the context of the video.
Editing
The split comic style is very interesting and really well done.
Effects
Comic, posterisation effect addeing to the theme of the video
Mise en scene
couple of props used, guitar, school grounds
Performance
So far the performance is good
Bit Short - DO MORE WORK
Like the framing
Effective acting
successful use of effects to create cartoon illusion
Great cutting skills
Well cut to music
different shots work well together
from one frame to another is effective
Not much to comment on but hey!!! But looks very good
Camerawork: very different and seems to work well.
Editing: Very good so far
Performance: seems ok.... exaggerated but confident and cartoon like.
Mise en scene: Need to have different locations
Effects: Very Good effects
Good steady shots
Nice work in the first sequence where adam goes from one clip to another
I like the comic book posterisation effect.
Good backgrounds
Very dramatic acting
Hard to tell so far but it looks like it has good contunity
Do more work only 12 seconds long.
George And Adam Say:
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