Other class feedback

Genre - Indie is the Genre
Apart from the performance it does fit with the style
the narrative doesn't fit
good video still

Relationships
Guitar parts are very effective

Camerawork
Close up guitar and vocal shots were good
shots of eyes and shoes also effective in split screen

Editing
blur x
comicbook
polerization x posterization
high saturation and contrast
slide transitions work well with the style
Text overlay makes it work with the comicbook style
Mirror images, both characters on at the same time

Mise en Scene
Costumes work well as do the instruments
Using the school works well as you don't stay in the same place to long
Library setting good place to close book
Lots of closeups so background is not too noticeable

Special Effect
Book idea good
Comic strip different different but effective
color saturation is so great
Great performance
Man gives really good performance
Split screen brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!