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Genre
It takes the conventions of comic books and pop art and makes them visual, effects are typical of lichtenstien. Indie genre. comic is quite typical- performance, clothing are conventional of the indie genre, intertextual, comics animation pop art etc

Relationships
The 1,1,1 makes 3 very effective, really like it overall

Camerawork

Lots of different shots, angles, really cleverly worked out, cartoon shots worked really well, splits screen worked really well. Lots of good close ups on Adams mouth, looked wicked. Speerch bubbles really worked with the camera work, very good

Editing

Editing i that it was well edited, writing to fast, like the use of screens in one, a bit too much empty space. Transitions a bit odd

Mise en scene
Fairly good, guitar and microphone worked well and library and the comic book Characters could ahve wore more different clothes to be more different, easier to tell apart.

Special effects
Whole video based on SFX such as (list) Help the ideas to come alive and helps the video to be interesting and visually impressive. Without effects it would have been really hard to do what they would have done, without making it confusing.